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05 Sep 2009 01:49 PM  

Still

By Alysaria

Within the cold shadows of the deep
A creaking corpse. A skeletal husk
Sightless socket staring,
An empty gaze.
Wounded and broken by unforgiving seas,
Now at peace beneath the churning waves,
At rest in the dark and vast.

Men no longer toil on this vessel.
Suffering, celebration, have ceased
Silent, haunters lurk,
Weaving through the worn planks.
This boat no longer sails
It’s voyages are a memory, a whisper in the pages of a story:

Sirens of the deep, black hair flowing
Sing, but not the songs of David
The bare, scarred, half-forgotten echo of the past,
A reminder of mortality, a tribute to all that is lasting.

Children of the Eastern Garden!
Speak with words made sweet by bitter fruit.
A golden tongue sweeps away the world in fantasy
Weaving fact and fancy into one.
Seek not truth.
Mystery is the life of imagination,
Brutal fact a fatal blow
The force to crack a mighty hull,
The grasp of greedy waves, dragging ever down.

Water soaked logs bear no tales.
Cling to the crinkled pages of ages past.
Within the deep stillness, there are no answers
Fathomless questions, unanswerable, stare up from the gaping hole.

But if you must,
Seek me.
Gaze upon the nameless
Faceless.
Blood red sky - an indifferent warning
Grim shade flashing blade bright across the waves.

 

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05 Sep 2009 02:05 PM  
Did you write that?
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"You must have chaos within you to give birth to a dancing star..."

"....And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you." - Nietzsche

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05 Sep 2009 02:34 PM  
Yep. It was my final project for poetry class
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05 Sep 2009 07:50 PM  

very nice! I wanted to make a poetry section/thread for the forum, but felt like it would be cheating, since I don't write poetry and couldn't post anything myself.

That was very pretty, though.  Thank you

 

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05 Sep 2009 11:41 PM  
Good, i like the imagery
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"You must have chaos within you to give birth to a dancing star..."

"....And if you gaze for long into an abyss, the abyss gazes also into you." - Nietzsche

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06 Sep 2009 03:51 AM  

Okay then...

 

Blue Man

I got the biscuit dropped
in my cup of tea blues.

I got the slight tear in the armpit
of my favourite jumper blues.

I got the loose connection
in my headphone earpiece blues.

I got the loud bathroom fan
that wakes people up

when I go for a late night piss blues.
I got the went to the corner shop

for a paper today and they didn’t have
the Saturday Guardian blues.

In the pines, in the pines.
I got the intermittent

broadband connection blues.
I got dem ol’ fresh parsley

doesn’t last very long blues.
I got a letter this morning;

what do you reckon it read?
It said: “O% until June 2010

on balance transfers.”
Boom boom boom boom

A-haw haw haw haw
Hmmm hmmm hmmm hmmm

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07 Sep 2009 04:14 PM  
>.> I'm going to write a Sestina now. I've had this idea for a while...but I'm gonna dive right in and make it up as I go.

I think I messed up the iambic pentameter.

The Stage

Upon the stage there are hundreds of ghosts
Shadows that linger inside of the dark
When the curtain rises, spirits all come to life
Their voices echo in those they possess
Unearthly whispers dared to be spoken
A shade resurrected in light

Upon the stage, stand the possessed
Though they speak, it is not their words spoken
Compulsions of those in the dark
They who are drawn by the spotlight
Seeking, craving are these ravenous ghosts
Resentful and jealous of life

Pages and pages of words yet to be spoken
Demand to be brought back to life
Again! Cry they, the angry ghosts
As silence falls on the curtained stage, dark
Enfolds the shades, their wails diminished, light
Extinguished. Emptiness theirs to possess.

Listen to them! Embrace unwavering light
Accept as your own the world they possess
Do not condemn them to the dark.
Live, just for a moment, another’s life
Release words which must be spoken
Beautiful enchantment weaved by the ghosts

Laughter, love, and tragedy brought to life
The merriment and sorrow of the ghosts
By shame, regrets, hope, longing, be possessed.
Murderer, lover, clown; they all wait in the dark
Waiting, waiting for lives to be spoken,
Their existence conjured into the light

Thousands of possibilities dwell in the dark
Age-old histories frequently spoken,
Mysteries yet to see the light
Those long ago, still living, and yet to have life
Scholars all, bring forth many ghosts,
Creations of the minds of those possessed

Listen. The ghosts, upon the empty stage, devoid of light
Apparitions in the dark have spoken:
Live as one possessed, for without passion, what is life?



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16 Sep 2009 01:42 AM  
I keep meaning to read these carefully, but not remembering until there's no time. It's almost 4:00 AM here now, and I can't think straight enough to keep up with poetry
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04 Feb 2010 03:17 PM  
Hmm, I'll probably pale compared to previous writers, but there's no loss. I chose three different themes for teh lulz.

Sadness

Days like this are a shame. It's days like this that you'd prefer not to exist. Your mind flies away, it wishes to be out of this. You don't want to be here, you don't want to do what you have to do. It's days like this... physically you should be fine, instead you feel tired. You're barely able to lift your arm. Getting up to shower is a battle, and fixing up breakfast is a war. You don't want to have to put up with life, at least not now. You want to rest. You need to cry. The tears are held back, only because they would make your life even more gloomy. You don't want pity, love, anything. You especially don't want the hate that keeps being sent to you. You just want... peace.


Anger

This has brought upon anger. This is the birth of fire. Fire of the earth, fire of the mad. Muscles tense. Blood is lost, tears are shed. Perhaps it is not hatred. Perhaps it is simply temporary blindness to sense. Perhaps it is insanity. Things become assumed, judgments are made. Pain is exchanged. Lives are lost, whether they be emotional or physical. The punishment encourages the heat. The heat encourages the red. The red encourages the fear. The fear of the dead and the living brings mourning. Mourning only feeds that desire. It feeds what this has brought upon. This is the death of life. Life of a fool, insanity of the sane.


Piano

There's a piano playing in my mind. Soft, sweet.
The low notes make a slow rhythm, setting the stage.
I dance, in life, to this song. Is it a song?
I act slowly, contemplate, and listen.
It's what the song calls, and it's what I do.

The song is riddled with sparsely placed high notes,
So unexpected, so sweet. To these, I don't dance.
I smile. These high notes, presenting.. mystery.
While I dance to soft, low tunes, my mind travels.
Travels to high places, to other people.

I cherish those high notes, more than the world.
It's hard to tell if those high notes cherish me,
The high notes never seem to stay.
Perhaps one will smile back, but she'll never stay.
I'm left to my low overtone, I'm left to think.

Maybe one day I'll find a person to dance with me,
Dance to my song. To the piano playing in my head.
Maybe the piano in theirs will sound good with mine.
Maybe their song will have a high overtone.
Maybe then we could create a masterpiece.



Cheers,
Ted.
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03 Mar 2010 10:08 AM  

Really great poems, you guys! I enjoyed reading them.

xD You inspired me to go digging through my poetry folder and I found this old one. Starting to rework it.

perhaps you still dream of civil war

the south:
a burnished gold,
cotton tinged with slight
smears of yellow (honey-light),
lazy humidity and dusty roads.
magnolia blossoms break
along the lines of your skin,
hanging on to the past, each reminder
a fresh bruise, a fresh crack—
translucent and fragile.

your dreams change to sepia.
you wake up, heart pounding,
remembering only smoke, bitter burning.
the tendons on your neck
stretch as you rebuild yourself:
crossed beams and skyscrapers
replace your fragile bones.
your eyes change, baby blue to gray.
your back aches and your ears ring
from humming shuttles and iron.
you forget how to breathe easily,
oaks rattling as you cough smog.

your skin is patchy with memory.
parts of you that want to forget,
[outer edges, manicured nails]
and parts that still remember:
[your stomach, the scar that runs across your legs]
your tan lines show as you
run your fingers across your wounds.
[burn marks and the crack of a whip]

you stretch your syllables
languorously, like a cat
but you are not, you are instead
a ghost that solidifies erratically.
you are tainted fog that blows away
to reveal steel, structured so
you’ll never fall down again.

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